Changes and additions
Hey, all! New to the wiki here and loving it. I saw that some of the episode pages were lacking in information, so I decided to jump in and help out. As you can see, I did something a little different with the formatting when listing the writers and director for this episode. That is, while other episodes list them in sentence form ("This episode was written by X and directed by Y"), I wrote them out in list format ("Writer" on one line, "Director" on another. There's actually a third credit for "Story" on this particular one as well). I'd like to keep using this format for other episodes, if no one objects.
Also note that while most episodes have comprehensive summaries, I thought it might be best to fill in some of the gaps here with brief synopses. These synopses are non-spoilery by design, and meant to give an overview of an episode at a glance - kind of like a listing in TV Guide. Again, I'd like some feedback on if I should continue in this manner.
Thanks, and I look forward to seeing you all around the wiki! -- Tom H123 00:51, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
- I think those are good ideas and I'll try to help you out in adding in such information on the other episodes. I also added an extended plot summary and some behind the scenes information here, which I've already done for some of the other S1 episodes. I'd say this article is in rather good shape at the moment. Perhaps it can be used as a model for how to expand other episode articles, if no one objects. -- Apollo Gilgamesh 00:13, 18 January 2008 (UTC)
I removed the edit that said the coach raped Billy as there is nothing in the episode to suggest that happened. The transcript says only that he "was found beaten and unconscious after his kiddie league game Saturday. Doctors describe his condition as critical." Amuk 00:13, 10 December 2008 (UTC)